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your breath on my cheek
shivers to my lips
races with mine
sharing moist heat
i taste your desire in me

-i hold you in my thoughts
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Tasty, exciting and dynamically pleasurable.
Nice work, Marni! :love:
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*astrangeallure Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ha! All of that in these few words! :D Thanks, Robert! :heart: :love:
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You know I like talkable but if a few words can express the contents of desire then there is more time for the more physical aspects.:heart:
You`re most welcome! :love:
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*astrangeallure Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haaaaaaaaaaaa! True! :love:
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=SweediesArt Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:love::worship::blowkiss:Outstanding..one can feel it. Never stop doing this Marni!!!!
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*astrangeallure Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Er, I don't know if I can stop now...which is interesting because if you were to have asked me two months ago if I would ever write a poem, I would have emphatically denied any desire! Actually, I might have sneered. :lol: Thank you so much, Karin, I really appreciate your kind words! :love: :tighthug:
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=SweediesArt Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
oh..really!!! I thought you've done this forever and ever.In that case you really have an hidden great talent.One can read your poems and understand them.And the words you are using are so beautiful and put together so very well. I love them!!!
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*astrangeallure Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:D Karin, I will love you forever!!!! :tighthug: I started with the four word poems on December 27...then finally worked up the nerve to write "A Piece of Meat" on January 4...I wrote a few pieces of flash fiction (very short stories, usually under 500 words) 10 years ago...one of them is posted on here...and that is it...so, wow, thank you!!!!!!! :love:
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=SweediesArt Feb 16, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Gosh!!I'm soooo glad for your sake Marni. It's just great so keep it up!!! You are already amazing and you are so talented:heart:
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*astrangeallure Feb 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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