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I'll save youWhen you're falling down
Take the time to notice me
Reaching for your hand

Let me inCan you hear me now?
I can't scream any louder
You are deaf to me

Without youEyes wide filled with fear
Rather be dead than alone
Lay in scarlet pools

Cowardice: A Haiku SuiteWe say "I miss you"
because it's easier than
saying "I love you"

and I was always
one to take the easy path.
Tell me, dear, weren't you?

EternalLost among the nymphs
Our love grows in ecstasy
Our dance eternal

Para (a) MusaVênus da voz encantadora,
venha sussurar entre meus lábios
nossos urros de prazer.

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Kissing in the Darka sky without stars
summer's moon falls prey to clouds
lips fumble, laughter

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Kissing in the Dark

by *astrangeallure, Feb 27, 2013, 11:48:37 AM
Literature / Poetry / Romantic / General / Haiku & Eastern

a sky without stars
summer's moon falls prey to clouds
lips fumble, laughter

Kissing in the Darkby *astrangeallure

Literature / Poetry / Romantic / General / Haiku & Eastern

©2013 *astrangeallure

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=CindysArt Feb 27, 2013 Professional Digital Artist

Wonderful!!!

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*astrangeallure Feb 28, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Thanks, Cindy!!

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*Shades-Of-Lethe Feb 27, 2013

Well, I don't think it needs to be reworked. It's perfect as it is! It really is!! A very beautiful vision written to perfection!!! Love it!

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*astrangeallure Feb 28, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Oh, thank you so much!!

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=SweediesArt Feb 27, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Beautiful!!!

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*astrangeallure Feb 27, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Thank you, Karin!! Did you get it right away? I think it probably needs to be reworked.

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=SweediesArt Feb 27, 2013 Hobbyist Digital Artist

I was thinking about love when I read it!!I mean making love!!

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~x-pyre12 Feb 27, 2013

open yet alone, something went wrong, won't give up...maybe a bit confusing but it's cool, Marni!

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