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butchered pulp
tenderized
with salted words

throbbing beat
drowned
with silence

cavernous wound
exposed
through a blanket with holes

something turned to nothing

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Just something...that is nothing. It's too rhythmic for me (and, yet, I know it's not), but parallelism kept pushing at me...will rework it later.

Edit: Slept on it!!! :D

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:iconhmissxx:
"Something" that is a really good piece of poetry, rich in images and emotions, my dear Marni!:heart:
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*astrangeallure Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much, Christina...:love:
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:iconchryssalis:
Wow!!Fantastic writting!I like it being confusing..Creates a very creepy feeling!:clap:
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Mood: Joy *astrangeallure Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, Athina...:D It does leave room for interpretation. :D :heart:
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:iconfairytale-mystic:
YES! D: I was EEEK! What is that?! What did she mean?! *Is confused*
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Mood: Affection *astrangeallure Jan 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's about feeling something for someone and then things don't go like the one expects it to...negativity (salted words), silence, vulnerability due to lack of warmth or feeling secure in the relationship (blanket with holes)...:) So, not a scary story...but a scary story. :D
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=Wordeea Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
for you, here : [link] ;)
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*astrangeallure Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Pour Moi? :love:
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=Wordeea Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:nod: :rose:
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