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Broken skin
peeled by clouds
in my fall from hope

Asphalt absorbed
in landing
seeps in
turning me to stone

Hardened heart
stills
with murmured cry
echoing to silence

Wake me
from this nightmare

Break my fall
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Trying to not edit so much...wrote this in 10 minutes....and here it is...

Edit: Had to!!!
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*Amanda-Graham Feb 7, 2013  Professional Writer
lol @ Je devais le faire.

I'm a big comfy old couch ... pick your point of impact.
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*astrangeallure Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, your couch legs have got to be sturdy because I have ghetto booty!! :laughing: Thank you. :D
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Wow! I really like the way you write :heart:
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Mood: Love *astrangeallure Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Don't make me love you, Pascal!!! :D :heart: Ah, merci beaucoup!!! :kiss:
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Wonderful,dear!!:love::clap:
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Mood: Love *astrangeallure Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much, Athina!! :heart: :woohoo:
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=SweediesArt Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful Marni:heart:
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*astrangeallure Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, Karin...:heart: :hug:
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=SweediesArt Feb 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome dear Marni:heart::hug:
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